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Crystal's SS Nuzlocke Set 11: Disobedience(Part 2) by Goddess-Chachi Crystal's SS Nuzlocke Set 11: Disobedience(Part 2) by Goddess-Chachi

EDIT: Script updates! I've also removed the "mature tag", because, in all honesty, it's not that bad. Just some blood.

I'm starting to think that 1 am is an optimum time to post artwork. Seriously. Somehow, I completed this between school and work taking over my life. I apologize for the wait, although there wasn't much I could do about that.

Ahem, so...uh...erm, well, let's start with artistic stuff here. I went internet searching and found a whole bunch of fun fonts that I immediately raped for this particular chapter. Utilizing fonts is my new favorite hobby, and THERE ARE SO MANY OUT THERE. I spent an entire day "shopping" for them (fonts are free). I also tried for cleaner lineart here. I think it's the best looking set so far because I think from this point on, I actually started giving a shit about how this looks since so many of you like my nuzlocke (for some reason or another :XD:) Seriously, guys, thank you so much.

Now onto the actual...content. SEE WHAT HAD HAPPENED WAS... okay, I can use a million excuses in the book, but all in all, it was my carelessness+a REALLY bad stroke of luck+terrible management of moves. See, Falkner's pidgey hit poor Patti hard with a critical hit, knocking him straight to yellow. Well, since I had already made a move with Pat, I thought to switch him out, but then remembered I still hadn't healed Ampi. So I potioned my mareep up with the turn, thinking Patti could take another hit. Well, just my damn luck, Pidgey hit hard AGAIN with another CH and knocked Patti out. It was just depressing to know that I had accidentally killed one of my own because of poor judgement. Of course, after all that, Ampi completely destroyed Falkner, but he's such a good sheep, he didn't even kill the two HAX'D brother birds. By the way, the "wet stuff" is that slimy secretion Whooper produce, according to their pokedex entry. It makes them hard to grab onto, supposedly. He used it to loosen Crystal's grip on him so that she'd be free to concentrate on the battle. It's not urination. Oh yeah, and this is the last set that's going to be formatte like this. I'm changing it up JUUUUUST a bit. No worries, though, guys.

So... R.I.P. Patti. You were a brat, but you had one last moment worth something, I hope. I, at least, will miss you.

Useless Herione: Crystal
Shy Stalkers: Ethan & Rilli
The Blind Cowlick Demon: Silver


Pokemon (c) GAMEFREAK, Nintendo, Satoshi Tajiri, etc.
Artwork & characters (c) :icongoddess-chachi:
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The innocent always dies first in war.
First blood... It always hurts. RIP Patti.
0.o... Patti... That got morbid rather quickly... I feel a little sadistic though, thinking about the way the gym is laid out and how this is the first one I've read where the height was really incorporated. Nice job though, playing with our heart strings ^^
I just noticed that Patti has an empty speech bubble. . . . I'm "just noticing" a lot of things. XD

I remember this being one of the most shocking deaths when I first started reading. It still kind of hits me that way. I'm surprised Falkner would allow his Pokemon to shamelessly attack another Trainer like that, particularly when that Trainer is trying to save a life.
s-so saaaaaaaaaadddddd!!!!!!!!!!!! poor patti
Iloveriolu Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Pattiiii ;n;
SolbiiMelody Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ack, it still hurts my feels reading this again ;u; <3
Lottos35 Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
not bad meaning just a question you did let us see a miltank's death but not your wooper (again not bad meaning)
Goddess-Chachi Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It was 2 years ago that I did Patti's death scene, and back then, I wasn't exactly brave enough to show a dead body. However, I've gotten over it, thus bloody Miltanks. XD
Lottos35 Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
good point
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